There are so many awkward things on this page. Awkward faces. Awkward word balloons. Awkward dialogue. Awkward, awkward. I think this might be one of my most awkward pages in...
Well, at least a week or two.
Oh good, Sam reminded them to go to the house. Even preoccupied trying to keep his sanity, he's a Very Useful Rabbit.
I guess rhyming Pooka is contagious.
uh oh ixnay on the bray-nay
I know, I know, it makes me nervous too, but I've started down this road and I have to see it through. I can't make the characters aware of something and then not have them acknowledge it here and there! Once the guns are drawn I've gotta stick to 'em.
A phrase which, in this context, sounds almost like a pun. But I won't investigate, God knows I don't want to draw attention to this.
...her bra feels tight?
Huh, I see the boob fairy strikes again.
Someone more clever than me make an idea for Zebra Girl, Breasts and April Fools
Well, frankly, Mystic Miasma's more of a tourist thing. I prefer Strangie's... 7@=Q
Besides, they have better lasagna... 7@=Q
Yeah, there are awkwardnesses, but I'm too gay for all the ladies to think poorly of it. :3
i feel u there
I wonder if there's not some kind of spell on our group of heroes?They are enjoying the town like a group of tourists. Where's the urgency?
I mean - they are there to hunt monsters, Sam's been urging them to hurry... and they go to a restaurant. Then they discuss how delish the meal was. FOCUS PEOPLE!
Something is amiss... and I think it's going to tie in with Sam's feeling of impending doom and tight ... *ahem* articles of clothing of the female variety, and even Tomie's skin color changing.
Can't wait to see how this turns out!!!
something is definitely amiss--i'm curious if perhaps zandra is doing something to try and effect people's emotions? gnnn i can't wait for the next page!
Just thought I'd pop into the comment section and ask if you are ok. I'm also wondering what it's like for you with the comment section now. Is it a source of motivation, or have there been unfriendly comments?
I know that a lot of authors receive comments and messages that just suck he life out of them. I don't know if you have received such comments, or the whole picture behind the scenes. As a fan it has been a pleasure to read the reaction of other fans and your own thoughts. Just thought I'd take the time out of my day to say thank you for the joy you've brought to myself and others.
Oh and in regards to this page: The face and reaction in the last panel are priceless!